Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Who else gets excited over English?

So this isn't part of my book. For an English assignment I had to write a reply to the poem "To His Coy Mistress." I am really proud of my rough draft and have decided to post it. Tell me what you think! :)

I also posted To his coy mistress so you don't have to go looking it up.

To his Coy Mistress
by Andrew Marvell

Had we but world enough, and time,
This coyness, lady, were no crime.
We would sit down and think which way
To walk, and pass our long love's day;
Thou by the Indian Ganges' side
Shouldst rubies find; I by the tide
Of Humber would complain. I would
Love you ten years before the Flood;
And you should, if you please, refuse
Till the conversion of the Jews.
My vegetable love should grow
Vaster than empires, and more slow.
An hundred years should go to praise
Thine eyes, and on thy forehead gaze;
Two hundred to adore each breast,
But thirty thousand to the rest;
An age at least to every part,
And the last age should show your heart.
For, lady, you deserve this state,
Nor would I love at lower rate.

        But at my back I always hear
Time's winged chariot hurrying near;
And yonder all before us lie
Deserts of vast eternity.
Thy beauty shall no more be found,
Nor, in thy marble vault, shall sound
My echoing song; then worms shall try
That long preserv'd virginity,
And your quaint honour turn to dust,
And into ashes all my lust.
The grave's a fine and private place,
But none I think do there embrace.

        Now therefore, while the youthful hue
Sits on thy skin like morning dew,
And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fires,
Now let us sport us while we may;
And now, like am'rous birds of prey,
Rather at once our time devour,
Than languish in his slow-chapp'd power.
Let us roll all our strength, and all
Our sweetness, up into one ball;
And tear our pleasures with rough strife
Thorough the iron gates of life.
Thus, though we cannot make our sun
Stand still, yet we will make him run



Reply to “To His Coy Mistress” 
by Tabatha Keeler (me)

If you would only understand my love, wonderful and gentle sir, you might stop your poetry and end your evil lure. My love does not include only you, though your shining eyes be crystal blue. My heart loves still my family and of my Christianity. You ask of me to scare the sun but what I desire is that from above. Future children wish I for me, and happiness for them broader than the sea. A river, as the Humber and Ganges be, can still be crossed in all honesty. When first met we ‘neath the blossom tree, I wondered if there were any man better than thee. I love you more than rubies shine, and for you, each day, my heart does pine.
But to every wind there is a shadow that falls upon one’s heart. And only those of closest bond does love not tear apart. You praised me much and asked of me what use is of my virginity. Why asketh me of virginity, for my love is worthy of nobility. You claimed that in the grave two may not embrace but neither I think do so behind hell’s gates. If I were to except your plea of me then there is of an utmost surety, that you will end your time, as many do of your kind. Even as the sun does rise, bringing with it a most blessed warmth, so does it set and leave cold whirling in its torrent.
Now, therefore, must this Coyness end and both of us must part. For not another day will I let you play drunkenly with my heart. What care have I if your lust is turned to ashes, so long as I may avoid sin’s bloody lashes. You have proved yourself unworthy so do you think we should stay, surely? I think not. For without lawful marriage, my life shall never be bought.

Friday, June 1, 2012

The End of School!!!

This is it! Only four school days left until I'm no longer a Junior but a senior!!!!! :p really I'm not that excited about it. Those four days are all testing. I got my first high school yearbook and was really disappointed. Besides the personal photo everyone gets, I was only in the yearbook twice and both times I looked awful. >:( Even my personal photo looks bad! Meanwhile, the best friends of the yearbook staff are in there over and over and over! one girls is in there at least 8 times. I'm sick of high school and am ready for college. College means I don't have to be a lifeguard anymore! Plus, I can take classes that I will really enjoy and can drop them whenever I want because it's my money! (well parents money). Senior year is going to drag. Choir is only offered at a fourth period class which is the same time as my A.P. Government class. Gov is mandatory, choir is not. So I never get to experience solo and ensemble. Instead I needed a new first period. My choice was A.P. Spanish or office aid. I already have three A.P. classes so I chose office aid. I hope I like it. :}
Because summer is starting, I don't have piano lessons anymore. I was thinking about singing lessons but I'm nervous about taking them. Cause that might mean changing my availability for work. Meanwhile, I wish I could just sing my heart away. It's the one way I can let my energy out. My new theatre class does not inspire for releasing energy. I want to dance but there are always people around. I can't wait for dance three next year! XD
I wish I had thought about an end of the year party two weeks ago so I could have taken a day off of work but sadly I waited to long. If I have time on the last day of school, maybe I'll do something special before heading out to work. Hopefully i won't have work that day! :)
Looking over what I've said, I see just how negative my life has been lately. A month ago life was great! Well, I'm going to post a cool video I found recently!
http://youtu.be/esW8w0umu6g

Saturday, May 12, 2012

Dollars and Crepes! Oo la la!

I felt like I should write more on my blog, even if I only have one subscriber. Hi Alli!
I've been working on an Movie Preview for Scarlet's Quest and it's been a pain.
But on a brighter note, I was very happy today. Why? I turned down $20.........Well, my job says that I can't except gifts or donations or tips so that was my main reason for turning it down but also because working 2 min.s over the time that I am off work is not worth 20 dollars and there was no way I could take money from a lady who just put on a private birthday party for a 1 year old and let us life guards have Popsicles and tiny sandwiches. I "feel all good inside." It made me think of a song "doing good is a pleasure a joy beyond measure, a blessing of duty and (light, right, life?)
And I loved our partial family reunion tonight at Kim and Davids, the crepes were great! The one person we were missing was Celeste. We miss you!!

Saturday, February 11, 2012

Bubbles, bubbles everywhere yet not a drop to drink

I'm blogging again...
Went to the mall with a gift card and came out with a full gift card and short 40 dollars cash. Turns out the meadows mall does not have a GAP but they do have a very expensive Victoria's Secrete. I did get a free hot-dog on a stick. It was good.
I distaste school. I only need to take 2 classes next year and 3 classes if I want an award. Yet, dispite this, the school district sees it fit to tell me that I must be taking at least 4 classes inorder to be enroled. I am so stressed about what class to take. I can't take Spanish because that would make it my 4th A.P. class. I don't want to take Theatre because I don't learn anything any more. I won't take Foods and Nutrition 2 because they won't be offering it, only Cullenary 1 which is pointless because it is the same thing as Foods and Nutrition 1. I don't know what to do for college and everyone keeps telling me it doesn't matter but it does. I don't want to end up like those others who picked a random major because they had to pay bills. I'm not good at what I am interested in and everything else is either too difficult for me or boring. I'm stressed and no one seems to understand the importance of this decision. No, I'm not picking my major in one night but I would like to at least have some interesting options besides working in Parks and Neighborhood Services for the rest of my life.
The reason I spent 45 dollars today? I needed time to myself where I can relax and see a real me.
I am lonely, so I needed a way to spend life a little happier. At least I did everything in cash so I'm not in debt! :)

:)Neither a borrower nor lender be. :)